Ready to give good cause

[lessary]

I have written a very rough draft for good cause for Riverside county california. I would like those in the know to look at it and critique it and then I will rewrite it and go for another Critique. I don't know how it is supposed to read. I would appreciate any help I can get. I hate to do things twice. Please contact me and I will send a copy for you review.

lessary@dc.rr.com

[lessary]

I was hoping for at least one respose.

[JSDinTexas]

I don't comment on things I don't know about but I did run across this:
Concealed Firearm Carry Permit in California: Information Database